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Post by PhantomBaz on Jul 17, 2012 23:31:28 GMT -9
I'm setting out on a bit of a mission to make a dwarf army. this is my second dwarf drawing and will be a captain/hero to the long swords as always, comments and advise are welcome ;D Phantombaz
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Post by kiladecus on Jul 18, 2012 2:35:05 GMT -9
My only thought is (well, aside from it looks much better than your first dwarf), watch out for the shoulders. You have the right arm coming out directly from the neck, and there doesn't seem to be any shoulder. If you move the right arm out a bit, that should correct this.
My only thought...
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Post by Vermin King on Jul 18, 2012 6:49:20 GMT -9
I totally agree with Kil on the right shoulder. I also wonder about his right hand being tucked into the belt.
I really like the beard and the 'tartan' arm bands. Everything looks spot on except from the belt up to the right of the beard. Hopefully an easy fix.
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Post by Reivaj on Jul 18, 2012 6:51:59 GMT -9
WOW, There was a big advance between the first and the second dwarf!! Congratulation, great work!
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Post by PhantomBaz on Jul 18, 2012 16:21:08 GMT -9
I didnt even notice that he didnt have a right shoulder LOL... I get to work on it soon.. his thumb is supposed to tucked belt with a clinched fist ( hence why you can see his fingers) but i was very sure if it look right or not... maybe once the shoulder is in place ( ) it'll look better thanks everybody
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Post by hackbarth on Jul 18, 2012 18:09:27 GMT -9
Long sword indeed! That sword must be a dwarf and a half tall!
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Post by Vermin King on Jul 18, 2012 18:18:23 GMT -9
On the fist, where the fingers are curled under, give a hint of knuckles and that should fix that. That and the shoulder and you'll have a great figure
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Post by PhantomBaz on Jul 18, 2012 19:40:57 GMT -9
Long sword indeed! That sword must be a dwarf and a half tall! yes that's the point (mind the pun), i was thinking about when dwarf fight men, knights on horse back, etc, and most other things that are larger. I know you have big axes and Hammers, but i wanted something unique. plus with these the blade is larger. I could see an image in me head of these hacking horses legs off and going to town on poor knight, splitting men and orcs in two... ;D
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