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Post by yifferman on Oct 1, 2015 11:48:10 GMT -9
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Post by Vermin King on Oct 1, 2015 15:00:20 GMT -9
You really need to write a description to go with this.
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Post by bravesirkevin on Oct 2, 2015 0:04:15 GMT -9
You really need to write a description to go with this. Yeah, there's so much stuff on RPGnow/DriveTHRU Rpg. It's important to make it as clear as possible so that people know what they're looking at.
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Post by wyvern on Oct 2, 2015 5:00:31 GMT -9
You really need to write a description to go with this. Yeah, there's so much stuff on RPGnow/DriveTHRU Rpg. It's important to make it as clear as possible so that people know what they're looking at. There's a further problem, because the Full-size Preview doesn't load either. I thought OBS checked this stuff for first-timers loading materials to the site? If so, they seem to have slipped badly in this case. It's especially annoying because the product was showcased in their weekly e-Newsletter, which would ordinarily be a Good Thing!
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Post by yifferman on Oct 2, 2015 6:23:33 GMT -9
yep i have some problem whit my intenet when i upload it, dont save some changes but i correct it.
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Post by Vermin King on Oct 2, 2015 6:40:45 GMT -9
I thought it was just my computer not letting the image load...
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Post by yifferman on Oct 2, 2015 6:51:56 GMT -9
I thought it was just my computer not letting the image load... well i check it , and the image load complette.
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Post by oldschooldm on Oct 2, 2015 7:03:38 GMT -9
No. It does not. The PDF is not properly formatted upon download. Please make a new PDF with official Adobe software.
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Post by yifferman on Oct 2, 2015 7:13:21 GMT -9
its strange... i can see it in my pc... it create it follow the guide lines of the site. , and i create it whit adobe photoshop.
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Post by mproteau (Paper Realms) on Oct 2, 2015 7:45:52 GMT -9
Firefox tells me it might not display correctly, and offered to open it in another application. The downloaded file tell sme that "Adobe Reader could not open '...' because it is either not a supported file type or because the file has been damaged ..." I can't see a preview.
Based on your screenshot, you've got two typos. It says "SARK BUDIES" up at the top.
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Post by yifferman on Oct 2, 2015 7:50:11 GMT -9
Firefox tells me it might not display correctly, and offered to open it in another application. The downloaded file tell sme that "Adobe Reader could not open '...' because it is either not a supported file type or because the file has been damaged ..." I can't see a preview. Based on your screenshot, you've got two typos. It says "SARK BUDIES" up at the top. i upload a new file, i hope you can open it. and i always use adobe reader x for open PDF
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Post by mproteau (Paper Realms) on Oct 2, 2015 10:54:19 GMT -9
yifferman - I've sent you a PM with some comments.
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Post by Rhannon on Oct 3, 2015 2:29:23 GMT -9
Very good work! Not great ( but only for now, imho ) but good. Potential is there ... a lot. Now I would follow the suggestions of other authors, artists and people with skills and experience (not me in short). as far as I'm concerned: 1- two US dollars are a bit too much for a paper minis ( not commissioned. In this case we would go 10 to $ 50 at least ) and its variant. ( Ok now it is a PWYW product. But the suggested price has remained so. ) 2 - A final commercial product can't be so, imho. it should have the cover, instructions ... Some figures in more ... As a buyer ( 2 bucks, It's not a prices' matter of price for now ) that's all for now. Personally I don't like very much the figure's face. The big smile reminds me to much a manga style. I don't really like it. But this is just a personal preference. For the remainder the figure it is perfect. Or at least really good.
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Post by lightning on Oct 3, 2015 3:39:26 GMT -9
i like the idea. very creative. i think you could develop the head part a little more. it looks more like a kangaroo head to me. i googled "fish men" and a lot of images show how the head could be improved to make it fishier ;-)
but the idea is really good!
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Post by yifferman on Oct 3, 2015 5:59:15 GMT -9
Very good work! Not great ( but only for now, imho ) but good. Potential is there ... a lot. Now I would follow the suggestions of other authors, artists and people with skills and experience (not me in short). as far as I'm concerned: 1- two US dollars are a bit too much for a paper minis ( not commissioned. In this case we would go 10 to $ 50 at least ) and its variant. ( Ok now it is a PWYW product. But the suggested price has remained so. ) 2 - A final commercial product can't be so, imho. it should have the cover, instructions ... Some figures in more ... As a buyer ( 2 bucks, It's not a prices' matter of price for now ) that's all for now. Personally I don't like very much the figure's face. The big smile reminds me to much a manga style. I don't really like it. But this is just a personal preference. For the remainder the figure it is perfect. Or at least really good. 1.- yep is agood idea... but ithink change it. 2.- yep, i correct it in the next, and yep its because i put its anime style xD
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Post by Rhannon on Oct 3, 2015 8:57:12 GMT -9
Very good work! Not great ( but only for now, imho ) but good. Potential is there ... a lot. Now I would follow the suggestions of other authors, artists and people with skills and experience (not me in short). as far as I'm concerned: 1- two US dollars are a bit too much for a paper minis ( not commissioned. In this case we would go 10 to $ 50 at least ) and its variant. ( Ok now it is a PWYW product. But the suggested price has remained so. ) 2 - A final commercial product can't be so, imho. it should have the cover, instructions ... Some figures in more ... As a buyer ( 2 bucks, It's not a prices' matter of price for now ) that's all for now. Personally I don't like very much the figure's face. The big smile reminds me to much a manga style. I don't really like it. But this is just a personal preference. For the remainder the figure it is perfect. Or at least really good. 1.- yep is agood idea... but ithink change it. 2.- yep, i correct it in the next, and yep its because i put its anime style xD OK. So you must go on. I can't wait to buy your other paper minis sets.
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Post by Cardstock Dane on Oct 3, 2015 13:32:13 GMT -9
What the others said - plus, I suggest some proof reading of the pdf itself. English is not my first language, either, so it's always a good idea to get someone with English as their mother tongue to go over it - I do that myself, even though I'm told that I'm a good English speaker. If you don't know anyone where you live, I'm convinced that you can get one of the kind folks here at Cardboard Warriors to help. Also, the copyright symbol doesn't look good. Why not use the one inherent in Windows: ©. Hold down alt, and type 0169, and you got it.
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Post by mproteau (Paper Realms) on Oct 3, 2015 14:00:28 GMT -9
Regarding the © symbol - I finally looked up how to do this in GIMP. Sadly, I'll have to relearn many keystrokes I've memorized (like Alt-0162 for the ¢ symbol...) In GIMP, when using the text tool, type Ctrl+Shift+u and you'll get a funny "u" window next to the caret where you're typing. Then, you type in the unicode value for a character. On Windows, I run charmap.exe and select the character I want. Along the bottom of the charmap window, it shows the unicode value for the character. For example, for © it will show U+00A9: Copyright Sign.
So, in GIMP, after typing Ctrl+Shift+u, type 00a9 and then hit the spacebar or hit the enter key, and poof! You've got your © symbol.
Of course, if you're going through the trouble of opening charmap.exe, you can always copy from there and paste into GIMP... But, once you've memorized the value to type, it can be faster to just type without needing charmap at all!
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Post by yifferman on Oct 4, 2015 3:23:08 GMT -9
Thakns for your comment, i need much to do Xd an yep the english is not my natal laguaje, but i try
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