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Post by yifferman on Aug 7, 2015 7:30:42 GMT -9
Here is teh shakwar a warrior fo the sea, because its not snought whit depper mosnters =3  Attachments:
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Post by mproteau (Paper Realms) on Aug 7, 2015 7:52:22 GMT -9
He looks great! In the spirit of the forums as a place for constructive criticism, I kindly offer this:
1) his hand appears closed on top of the hilt of the sword on the back (top) side. Trimming that a little would make his fingers appear to wrap around the hilt more.
2) his shoulder on the back confuses my brain, so I feel like there's some missing subtle cues about anatomy. I think there needs to be a line that emphasizes that his arm is *in front* of the back, maybe with the shoulder blade lines coming up a little higher or something.
3) The front (bottom) side hand holding the sword seems to be missing a finger? I expected to see three.
I love this mini, and would pay for a set of these guys in different poses with appropriate weapons and what-not.
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Post by squirmydad on Aug 7, 2015 8:32:20 GMT -9
Thanks yifferman he looks good. It now only needs a completed build pic to be a legal entry.  |
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Post by yifferman on Aug 7, 2015 9:01:33 GMT -9
Thanks yifferman he looks good. It now only needs a completed build pic to be a legal entry. i work on it, and i have question, can i use teh same in a group category? |
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Post by squirmydad on Aug 7, 2015 10:40:50 GMT -9
Thanks yifferman he looks good. It now only needs a completed build pic to be a legal entry. i work on it, and i have question, can i use teh same in a group category? No, that needs to be a separate entry. You can re-use your creations as part of a diorama for the Papercraft builder categories though. |
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Post by yifferman on Aug 7, 2015 10:57:36 GMT -9
i work on it, and i have question, can i use teh same in a group category? No, that needs to be a separate entry. You can re-use your creations as part of a diorama for the Papercraft builder categories though. i see, ok i do another for that. |
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Post by arcticdragongames on Aug 7, 2015 12:13:56 GMT -9
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Post by yifferman on Aug 7, 2015 15:11:17 GMT -9
here is ensambled. |
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Post by yifferman on Aug 7, 2015 15:13:18 GMT -9
well i think in they before, but they arent weres |
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Post by squirmydad on Aug 8, 2015 21:03:06 GMT -9
Congratulations on being the first officially complete entry in the Papercuts 2015 Showcase.  |
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Post by aaron on Aug 9, 2015 14:17:09 GMT -9
I love the coloring! great job!
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Post by yifferman on Aug 9, 2015 17:03:33 GMT -9
I love the coloring! great job! thanks =3 |
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Post by oldschooldm on Aug 28, 2015 14:01:03 GMT -9
Bright coloring prints very well. Well done. Are you planning on more doing more?
Your style is in good company with many designers that hang out here - you're fitting in perfectly. Thanks for jumping straight into the deep end and entering the contest.
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Post by yifferman on Aug 28, 2015 14:48:00 GMT -9
Bright coloring prints very well. Well done. Are you planning on more doing more? Your style is in good company with many designers that hang out here - you're fitting in perfectly. Thanks for jumping straight into the deep end and entering the contest. }actualy i do much more, but are whit inverted face, its to difficult do a 2 diferent sides xD |
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